I so like how this one conveys a sense of you both being “hunters” on the prowl for “newness”–so apt! And, reserving the third line for “California” only highlights its hugeness and sense of promise as you work to make the “dreaming” become reality. Way to go….I love your haiku website! Keep it going!
I so like how this one conveys a sense of you both being “hunters” on the prowl for “newness”–so apt! And, reserving the third line for “California” only highlights its hugeness and sense of promise as you work to make the “dreaming” become reality. Way to go….I love your haiku website! Keep it going!
California Is only ten finger taps On my new IPAD
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